Write about the following topic: Some people believe that children should be made disciplined by making them obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others, however, believe that those children who are controlled are not well-prepared to tackle the challenges life brings to them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, there are many

method

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methods

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of parenting that

used

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are used

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to educate

childrens

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children

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. The majority of people agree

kids

need to be disciplined by pushing them. Meanwhile, others believe that it will give

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impact

to

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on

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students'

surviving

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ability. It

is widely believe

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is widely believed

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that parents should force children to obey the regulation, as it can form their good

habbits

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habits

. Indeed,

this

parenting model can

increased

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children to

having

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the appropriate

characters

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characteristics

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.

For example

,

kids

could reflect to throw litter in the place as it came from the adults' regulation.

Thus

, it is an effective method to prepare

kids

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a

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apply

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responsibility

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individual

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.

On the other hand

, others argued that by

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equipped

the strict rules.

This

will affect

childrens

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children's

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flexibility and creativity in

overcome

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any issues.

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, they may not

able

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be able

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to handle financial

problem

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, because adults did not acquire

them

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apply

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the concept.

Hence

, it is

also

an important thing to equip

kids

the

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concept and the reasons why they could not do those certain actions. In conclusion, if adults force children to obey the rules, they will follow

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well and have a top-notch character.

However

, parents or teachers have to be flexible and could not forget about the importance of

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the concept

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.