The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from, and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table gives information about
police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
and where it come
from, Change the verb form
comes
while
pie charts illustrate how that budget
was distributed between 2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain. The data is measured in million pounds for table and percentages for pie charts.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
budget
for National Government and Local Taxes witnessed a marginal increase, while
this
figure for other sources almost remained unchanged between
2 years. The share of distributed Change preposition
for
money
of salaries was less considerable than technology
figure in 2018, Correct article usage
the technology
while
the index for spending money
to
building and transport stayed the same.
Looking at the details, the figures for Change preposition
on
National
Government Correct article usage
the National
budget
experienced a steady growth from 175.5 m in 2017to
177.8 in 2018, Correct your spelling
2017 to
while
this
index for Local Taxes increased by almost 10 from 91.2 in 2018. The number of other resources budget
almost remained unchanged with
38.5. Change preposition
at
However
a dramatic increase was the case in total Add a comma
,However
budget
from 304.7 to 318.6.
The share of money
spending
Replace the word
spent
for
salaries was 75 % in 2017 in Britain, in the following year it decreased to 69% Change preposition
on
while
there was a substantial rise of
technology from 8 % to 14%. The proportion of spending Change preposition
in
money
of
buildings and transport stayed the same with 17 both in 2017 and 2018Change preposition
on
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