The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Write at least 150 words.
The flowchart illustrates the
process
of manufacturing
ethanol
fuel from corn.
Overall
, there are 9 distinct stages in
this
linear
process
, commencing with getting corn and culminating with transporting it to customers.
Besides
, preparing
ethanol
requires specialized equipment with water. The initial phases of
this
pictorial diagram all happen
on
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huge corporations.
At the first
stage
in the
process
, the corn is stored in containers and it is milled in order to prepare
to
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another
stage
. Once milling
corns
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corn
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are cooked for 4 hours, it is fermented for 2 days as it is
crucial
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a crucial
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stage
of
this
process
. In the following
stage
fermented
product
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products
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in separated
to
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2
phrases
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: liquid and solid products.
Then
liquid
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product is purified. After liquating
ethanol
is
purifying
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for 5 hours. Over the course of
8th
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the 8th
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stage
purified
ethanol
is stored. The final step involves carrying the ready products to special tracks and transporting them to customers
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