Your city council is planning to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen, you do not want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council. In your letter, • say what the importance of this historic building is • mention why it should be renovated rather than pull down • suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in the future
Dear Sir/Madam,
I read in the newspaper about your plans to demolish the Castle because of the lack of funds to do the renovation. I would like to
courage
you to plan to maintain it rather than pull it down.
As we all know Verb problem
encourage
that
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this
castle is the main remarkable monument for our town and as it is about 200 years old. which reminds us of our ancient traditions and culture. Moreover
, This
place is not only related to our culture but also
it is a famous tourist attraction for outsider visitors. which gives many job opportunities to our townspeople.
Despite the age of this
castle, still is in good condition. Furthermore
, there are so many tools and
utensils and other household items kept in better condition which could only be possible in Correct word choice
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this
historical building. So, I would recommend planning to maintain it instead
of demolishing it. If it would
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is
demolish
in the upcoming days, our future generation Wrong verb form
demolished
would
never learn about our ancient traditions and culture.
I can suggest you arrange some campaign about collecting the funds from the public and there are many builders in town who can take responsibility for the maintenance. People can contribute to saving Wrong verb form
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this
historical place and can arrange for a volunteering team could take care of it.
I hope you will consider it a serious matter and change your plans soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mandeep SinghSubmitted by mandeepsinghsony2022 on
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task response
Make sure to fully address all parts of the task prompt, including the importance of the building, reasons for renovation, and a plan to raise funds.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter in a more coherent and cohesive manner, including using appropriate paragraphing and a clearer introduction and conclusion.