You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The two maps below show changes in the bookstore from 2000 until today. First of all, we can notice that
this
store gained a new cafe inside of it. Before, there was a long wall that was only filled with fiction genre books. Others,
such
as Hobbies, art, and cookery was placed in a row in the centre of the room.
However
, we now have tables there, and
instead
of an area for,
non-fiction
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,non-fiction
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we can see an entire cafe.
Overall
, that one difference led to the moving of all of the genres except travel and new books to one area, near each other.
Secondly
, the first look
while
entering the library remained the same.
For example
, we still have shelves for travel and fresh books opposite the door.
Although
, the service desk is at its origin, at the right corner from the entrance. In conclusion,
this
place noticeably changed by adding one more service available.
On the other hand
, the catalogue of genres was not improved or faced adjustments at all.
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