Task one, you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after six years old child. Write a letter to the parent,in your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

Dear Mr and Mrs Smith, My name is Gold, I am writing in response to your advertisement
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daily news magazine 4th edition on 24 June 2019 that you need a
baby-sitter
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, I would like to let you know that I am interested in the job
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because I love to be with kids,
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, I just graduated from the
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where I study child care management. Throughout my study's in school I was made to care for kids most especially kids within age one and six, with
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I have learnt
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a lot
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to keep them busy. During my leisure time with
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I would like to visit a
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child hood
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friend who I recently know lives in Australia, I would go to her place to spend some time with her. I will be looking forward to
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from you soon. Yours sincerely, Gold Joy.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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