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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
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The three pie charts give information about the different measures that the three countries resolve dangerous waste
products
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. A quick glance at these graphs reveals that most of the
products
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 in
Sweden
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 and The United Kingdom are handled underground,
while
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 recycling is the most commonplace in the Republic of Korea. Looking at the details, the underground method accounts for 55% and 82% respectively in
Sweden
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 and The UK,
whereas
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this
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 figure is much smaller in the Republic of Korea, at 22%.
By contrast
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, the proportion of
products
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 dealt with recycling in Korea is nearly triple that in
Sweden
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. It is noticeable that The UK handles these waste
products
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 in ways that the other 2 countries do not do, including dumping at sea and chemical treatment, which make up 10% of the total
products
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.
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,
this
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 country has not implemented recycling to deal with those
products
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.
In addition
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, its use of incineration is one-tenth compared to that of
Sweden
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.
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