Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that parents should allow their
children
to make Use synonyms
decisions
on everything, Use synonyms
such
as food, clothes and entertainment. But Linking Words
this
makes them only think about themselves and it has an effect on society which leads to them thinking just about themselves. Other people say that it is vital for Linking Words
children
to make Use synonyms
decisions
about issues that affect their Use synonyms
life
, namely choosing a major university.
The subjects that Use synonyms
children
should make their own Use synonyms
decisions
have some negative impact on their lives. The main disadvantage is that Use synonyms
children
's Use synonyms
brain
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brains
not
grow enough to make some Add a missing verb
do not
decisions
, Use synonyms
also
they cannot decide what is good for them and what is not. Linking Words
For example
, as we know fast food is one of the most delicious foods, and almost all people love it. But fast food does not have any healthy ingredients. So, if Linking Words
children
eat it every day, it is highly likely that it will cause serious bad effects namely, obesity and high blood pressure. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is not Linking Words
good
idea to allow Add an article
a good
children
to make every Use synonyms
Use synonyms
decisions
that they want.
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decision
On the other hand
, parents should allow Linking Words
children
to make important Use synonyms
decisions
in their Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
This
makes Linking Words
children
more independent and Use synonyms
learn
to take responsibility for their choices. Change the verb form
learns
For instance
, one of Linking Words
them
most important issues that Correct your spelling
the
children
have to be taken when they grow upUse synonyms
,
is choosing Remove the comma
apply
major
university. Because Add an article
a major
with
that Change preposition
of
decision
they start their work career path. So, they have Add a comma
,decision
take
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to take
the
responsibility Correct article usage
apply
of
their Change preposition
for
decisions
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, if they know they have to take responsibility for their Linking Words
decisions
, they might make choices wisely.
In conclusion, allowing Use synonyms
children
to make Use synonyms
decisions
on their own on Use synonyms
every day
matters like choosing what they eat, Correct your spelling
everyday
wear
, Correct word choice
and wear
it
has a negative effect on their Correct pronoun usage
apply
life
. Use synonyms
However
, it is good for Linking Words
children
to make some important Use synonyms
decisions
about their Use synonyms
life
. And I agree with Use synonyms
this
statement it helps them to be more independent and more responsible.Linking Words
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