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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that
students
 who specialize in medicine and engineering should
work
 in the
country
 where they learn the course rather than working in another
country
.
However
, some
people
 claim that they should
work
 in any
country
 they desire.
This
 essay will take both statements under examination and will indicate the writer’s view in the end. It is undoubtedly certain that the tuition fees between
home
students
 and international
students
 are totally different. Tuition fees for
home
students
 are not as high as those for international
students
. For some ,studies local
students
 have to pay three times less than other nation’s
students
. That’s why they should do something for their
country
 back, especially careers
such
 as doctors and engineers since they are critical for the development of the
country
. For those who go abroad to study, it would be better for them to
work
 in that
country
.
This
 is because they have already got training from that
country
 so that when they
work
 in that
country
 there may be no huge difference in practicality as they are already familiar with the concept and perspective of that
country
. Some
people
 argued that every professional should have a right to
work
 in any
country
 they want. That’s why even doctors and engineers should be able to in the
country
 where they did not learn the course. Rather than studying and working in a
country
, working in other countries can gain international experience and more knowledge. They may have to try harder and face more challenges. It is believed that the more challenges
people
 accept, the more improvement
people
 get. That’s why it is reasonable to
work
 in another
country
 by not working in the nation that they did training in. Those who go abroad, should come back to their
home
country
 and
work
 there in order to share their knowledge and experience with other citizens which can give so many benefits to the
country
 rather than working in the
country
 where they attended university. In my point of view, every person should have freedom and have a right to choose their career by themselves. Some
people
 study in their
home
country
 and
work
 in another
country
while
 others attend university in another nation,
then
 come back and
work
 in their
home
country
. It does not matter at all.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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