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Dear Mr Jackson, I am writing to you to see what can be done about the large

tree

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at the front of your house. The

tree

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leans over my side of the fence which divides our properties. It is not just a nuisance but

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a danger. It drops a large amount of debris on my roof and these leaves and twigs block the downpipes. During the

last

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heavy

rainfall

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my house leaked

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. My worst fear is that in a storm the

tree

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might fall down, damaging my house and possibly injuring my family. The

tree

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has been a problem for over ten years and I have talked to you about it before but the

tree

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has now reached

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a height that I urge you to take action immediately. I think you should have the

tree

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removed. An alternative course of action would be to prune the

tree

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to fence level, but I think it would die anyway if you did

this

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. I hope the problem can be resolved soon. Yours sincerely, Saman

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coherence and cohesion

The letter is generally well-structured, but consider clearly separating the description of the problem and the proposed solution into distinct paragraphs for improved clarity.

task achievement

You could enhance your response by providing a more detailed explanation about your previous conversations regarding the tree and their outcomes.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is suitably formal and polite, making it appropriate for the situation.

task achievement

You clearly describe the problem and provide a strong rationale for your request, demonstrating a good understanding of the task requirements.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

177 words

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