Childhood obesity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this and how can the problem be managed?

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is increasing rapidly in most

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countries.

Children

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love to eat fast

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and ignoring to eat healthy meals.

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because

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generation is becoming unhealthy. There are many reasons why

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obese, and I believe there are some solutions to solve

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serious

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of junk foods

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increasing and

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rates

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increased among

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well known

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fact that unhealthy nourishment is the first predictor of

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recent research, fast

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consumption among

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increased two times in past 5 years. The second strong factor which might lead to

obesity

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is inactivity.

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kids are not running or playing outside. Generally, they are playing video games;

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, they are not physically active.

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a child

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who plays football

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will have less risk to be obese compared to

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who is inactive.

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these reasons,

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obesity

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reached

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a serious point

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many countries.

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.

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, there are some solutions

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childhood

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the childhood

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obesity

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problem

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. We can reverse

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to a solution.

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,

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may make

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activity mandatory in schools. With the

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the activity level will increase so the

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level will decrease.

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, it can be forbidden for

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to buy fast

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without their caregiver.

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will control the consumption of junk foods. In

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situation,

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will be active in sports, and they will eat better foods. In brief, I believe that these solutions would manage the

childhood

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obesity

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problem

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. In conclusion, fast

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and movelessness are increasing

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childhood

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obesity

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.

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, there are two regulations which might solve

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problem

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. These are making

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activities mandatory in schools and making forbidden to

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fast

food

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to

children

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without their parents.