Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest

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mental and physical health. I believe that leads to

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comprehensive solutions to overcome

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challenges. To commence with, I think that the main reasons why people

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education

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and associated costs, like accommodation

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most employers prefer

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with experience,

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employees who just graduated

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students seek jobs right during

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special loan programs, that

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to big debts. For

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, younger people are looking part-time

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which

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experts

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more knowledge, or

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loan that can be paid after graduation.

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solution can be

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a scholarship offered by various organisations ,

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of knowledge. And some employers can suggest

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option

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working.

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pass exams

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can choose

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and day for work based on their flexibility.

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for individuals who

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study abroad.

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remedies allow

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in dealing with the difficulties faced by a pupil In conclusion,

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it can be challenging for mental and physical health to balance

education

and work for a young person,

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we might be able to

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right

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source. After analysis, these suggestions can solve mental and physical health and achieve

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which their have