Some people think it is acceptable to use the animals in any way for benfits of human beings, while others think it is not justifiable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

the question of whether should
people
use
animals
for their purposes or not is controversial. many
people
think that scientists and
humans
should
use
animals
for getting
benefits
, others believe that exploiting
animals
for many purposes is not justifiable.
while
this
essay will look at both arguments, I partially disagree with the former point
due to
the
benefits
of
animals
in both, developing cures and improving health. many
people
think that
humans
are not allowed to
use
animals
for
this
purpose for many reasons.
firstly
, they think that
animals
have rights and
being
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under
humans
in
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the hierarchy level does not mean that we should exploit
animals
.
animals
have feelings like
humans
, and
people
should take care of them like their dogs or cats.
moreover
, in our modern world, scientists can replace
animals
with developed technology or
use
plants to do their studies.
hence
, in terms of ethics and welfare,
people
should not anticipate
animals
and bring them harm to gain advantages. other folks believe that using
animals
for many purposes has a strong positive impact on society. many doctors do their experiments and tests on
animals
to cure many diseases and invent vaccines.
for instance
, during covid-19, several pharmacists and doctors experiment
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vaccine on hamsters to gain the maximum
benefits
and avoid the potential risk that could happen to human beings.
moreover
, since animal physiology
similar
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to
humans
, medical tests can rely on. In terms of improving health,
animals
have food
benefits
that cannot be found in vegetarian meals. In summary, using
animals
might consider unethical, and there are other facilities available for curing diseases and inventing medicines
instead
of harming
animals
,
However
, the
benefits
of doing experiments on
animals
cannot be counted
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