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"Whoever controls the media also controls the opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

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It is been argued that individuals' inputs and behaviour are governed by the mass
media
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 and their controllers. On the other ,hand few believe that it does not tune the human mindset. I personally support former input and supporting arguments will be explained in upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, undoubtedly,
media
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 has become the primary source of collecting
information
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 on domestic and international affairs. Everyone trusts the
news
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 and starts reacting and behaving as per the situation that has been broadcasted, either positively or negatively. Whatever content is shown on TV would have a direct effect on
people
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 thinking.
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, recently there were some details were shown regarding the COVID cases increasing in China again and
people
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 start wearing masks again even though the
information
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 was not authenticated.
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, in the contemporary world
people
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 are spending their significant time on social
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 and fake communication creates a hard discussion atmosphere and
people
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 start fighting over it.
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, the
news
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 creators' content has the power to control
people
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's behaviours.
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, there are a few masses who believe that every individual has the capability to analyse the content and that it should be observed as regular
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 only. To be precise, newspapers and daily
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 highlights are considered sources of
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 to keep up to date with surrounding activities. To demonstrate,
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 a report shared by the local paper, 30-40 % of questions appear in the competitive exam only from general knowledge which students refer to the local newspaper or TV
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. Apart from that, since there are an array of channels available and online updates
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 keep buzzing in the mobile they lose interest automatically as they are very much biased toward each other to raise their TRP.
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, the ability is the
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 for knowledge to keep yourself up to date with society.
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,
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, mass
media
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 is capable to force
people
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 to think and execute
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information
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. Yet, many
people
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 do not get panic and use it as a source of knowledge.
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