Always telling the truth is the most important considerations in relationship. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that it is more advantageous to choose a
relationship
with telling the
truth
even if it will make
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discussing or debating more to our
relationship
. I completely agree with
this
opinion and think that telling the
truth
is more important than lying
in
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our partner. First of all,
i
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believe that giving honesty to
partnership
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give the
relationship
become comfortable rather than lying to our
partnership
can bring us
comfortable
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relationship
. Even if someone
is lie
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to get attention and avoid the problem with our
partnership
,
this
won't enjoy his life.
While
talking with the
truth
will always bring pleasure and
feeling
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a feeling
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of
pleasant
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.
For instance
, faris
adrian
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decided to
telling
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the
truth
about his career and money to our girlfriends. After telling the
truth
, he will get the
feel
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of trusting very comfortable with the
relationship
and will make the
relationship
to the next step of life.
Thats
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why
its
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it's
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important to choose the
truth
to
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our
partnership
and that makes our
partnership
is
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happy.
Secondly
, telling
a
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truth
will
leads
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to growth
the
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mindshet
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mindset
of our
relationship
.
In other words
, there is a strong
relation
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between
the
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honesty and faith. People who love
partnership
can
easly
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easily
achieve
the
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increase
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motivation
to
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a better life than put
a
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lying to
a
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prioritize for
a
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good sake.
For example
, a small family with a boyfriend
that
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who
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having
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has
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a bad career that always
have
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a healthy family because the boys always seek
the
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money
from
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the right ways and
teeling
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telling
to a girlfriend the right things.
Then
, compare to the boys seeking the amounts of money for the family in the wrong ways or corruption it will make the future of the family will not comfortable, divorced, and broken home.
Thus
,
advantages
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of telling
a
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truth
keep our family have a person with faith personality.
To conclude
,
i
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strongly believe that telling the
truth
is more beneficial than telling a lie
for
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relationship
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,
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because it makes the
partnership
will be comfortable and have a faithful personality.
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  • Paramount
  • Foundation
  • Absoluteness
  • Diplomacy
  • Conflict resolution
  • Longevity
  • Prerequisite
  • Empathy
  • Communicate
  • Beneficial
  • Harmful
  • Healthy relationship
  • Building trust
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