You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Mr.Lee, I am a student of your college.I am writing
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letter in regard to request for making some changes that are needed in the college's cafeteria. Well,I prefer to have my lunch inside the cafe of school.I go there every day.
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,I really like the food options that are being offered inside it .
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,I am glad to tell you about cleanliness .It is so hygienic and dust-free.I and my classmates really like to sit there and unwind a bit.
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, the staff of the lunchroom is extremely helpful and understanding.
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,there is one difficulty that most of us have to tackle .Well, there are not enough chairs and tables to sit and have our meal.We have to stand there and to be honest, it is very uncomfortable.
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,sometimes snacks fall down from hands and water spills are very normal.It is good that cleaners clean in so often but it would be better if you can install more furniture to sit on.I would be really thankful to you. Yours sincerely, Anmol Sharma
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