In some countries, children are often told that can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
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children
that only if they work hard and are hardworking, they might achieve anything. Obviously, saying Use synonyms
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statement correctly, they will work hard to achieve their aims and personal goals. Linking Words
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, he refused to participate in different competitions which would be beneficial for them in the future. But when his Linking Words
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started learning even better than before.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite