Children these days spend a lot of time apart from their parents because in many homes, both parents work. What problem can be caused by this? What are some ways to support such children?
Today’s children spend an increasing amount of
time
away from their Use synonyms
parents
since their mothers and fathers need to make a living. Use synonyms
Although
it is a serious problem, Linking Words
this
can be resolved by extracurricular sessions.
First of all, spending most of the youngsters’ days separately from their Linking Words
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leads to a few deficiencies for the young when it comes to affection. Use synonyms
This
makes children feel lonely and totally rely on their Linking Words
parents
when they have Use synonyms
time
together. Use synonyms
For instance
, as my Linking Words
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had full-Use synonyms
time
jobs, my grandmother took care of me and my younger brother when we were young. Use synonyms
This
encouraged him to extremely count on my mother and father because he could not fully communicate with them when he needed them.
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, there are some solutions to Linking Words
this
issue. Extracurricular activities can give offspring a sense of bond with their friends Linking Words
instead
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. Rather than spending the rest of their day waiting for their mothers and fathers at home after school, learning something beneficial with peers is likely to help the youths to alleviate their loneliness. Use synonyms
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, I used to join after-school programs when I was in elementary school because I felt nervous and scared when I was at home with my brother Linking Words
while
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. I could spend a few hours learning art or musical instruments with my friends, which mitigated my anxiety and loneliness which were caused by the lack of quality Use synonyms
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In conclusion, even though it is obvious that for offspring, spending less Use synonyms
time
with their Use synonyms
parents
can lead to a lack of affection. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
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this
can be dealt with by extracurricular activities with their classmates.Linking Words
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