Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

Some folks said that

music

can

bringing

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them to different cultures and ages background at the same time. The author slightly

agree

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with

this

statement. So,

this

writing will be given the opinion about it. To start with, there are many types of

music

such

as pop, rock, and

classic

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.

People

start to listen

the

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genre of

music

that they like.

Furthermore

, they will

looking

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for another listener with the same taste

of

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as

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them.

For example

, if someone

want

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to watch a concert, they will bring a friend with her or him. Because it will be more fun to share

this

experience with

another

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people

.

Thus

, they meet a lot of

people

with different cultures and ages background

at

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the same place.

On the other hand

, it depends

to

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the person itself. Despite having a similar taste of

music

, does not mean the community can get along easier.

However

, it

also

depends

how

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on how

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the

music's

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community

themself

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.

For instance

,

korean

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pop is very popular in Indonesia, those fans start to make a group to support

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the korean

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korean

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Korean

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music

industry, it is good because they can share the same interest and talk about

korean's

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culture. Even though

,

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there are many fan groups in Indonesia and it is possible to fight with another group. In conclusion,

music

can be a

media

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medium

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to learn new

culture

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cultures

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and meet new

people

, but it depends

how

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a listener

reacting

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reacts

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to it. The reason why

i

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I

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agree with

this

statement

,

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because

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music

is easy to access and some

music

contains a message on it, which can bring us to new

people

.