The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008.
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The given maps highlight information about the plot of a museum in 1998 and its redevelopment plan that was taken place in 2008.
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, it can be seen that there were no changes regarding the size but the place of most internal ports altered with the exception of the garden at which point remained in the centre of the museum
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a small port outside of the building. Looking at the details, the toilet
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on the north side just on the right hand of the Cafe which used to be in the southeast.
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, a special sitting area was given to the Cafe from the garden.
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this
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, a restaurant had been constructed on the left above corner. A notable change had been the fountains at the bottom of the garden. Another striking point is that the temporary Exhibition room was demolished and make way for the Bags and Coats area and the Exhibition room itself was introduced in the West.
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, the shop had been knocked down from the right hand to the left hand of the Tickets port. Needless to say, permanent Exhibition rooms and Entrance/Exit parts were the only ports that did not take any changes.
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