It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Taking
risks
is an unavoided thing in our professional lives and personal lives. For me, the process of through
risks
is the precious experience, so I think the strengths of taking
risks
more than the shortcomings. We faced the various difficults from the first day we born on
this
world and we through all of it.
For example
, when we were children, we learnt how to ride a bike independently, we need to deal with the blanced problem and have the possibilities droped off bike and get hurt, that's a risk for a child. But from that we knew how bicycle works and
then
we will don't afraid with the things we don't familiar. When we elder, like in the middle school or university, we have to handle the complicated relationship around us: friends, lover, parents, competitors, ect. It's a challenging issue for everyone but it's
also
a benefical oppurtunity for us too, we get a lot of advantages from
this
risks
and understand how to construct a better daily life.
However
in professional lives, the
risks
maybe more reality. When we fall in a critical investation or lose a client who hold the large part of stocks of agency, we are in the trouble. But everthing will be solved, we
also
will get the some important things towards these, like friend's caring and advices, family's conditionless supports, the helping from colleagues and the
last
but not least one: our optimistic attitude which lead us through all of trouble. So when we have to take
risks
, belived you can through it.
Although
the process will painful, we will get more than a exprience than a risk!
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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