In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the modern age, technological development plays a crucial role in a convenient human lifestyle. It is expected that near future, all

transport

like cars, buses and trucks will be automated and only individuals going inside these

transport

will be passengers. The essay describes every scrutinised merit or demerit and I believe that the

driverless

transportation system will be comfortable without any accidents in future. To commence with, automated vehicles will take a short hour to go anywhere without causing any accidents.

For

this

reason, most people will be encouraged to adapt and energize themself for a safe journey.

For example

, In New York City, the accident rate has decreased significantly by 80% compared to the previous time and passengers get free hours to read or watch the newspaper.

In addition

driverless

vehicles will be a blessing for disabled people without others' help.

Due to

this

reason, it is predicted that disabled person will become a huge amount of human resources for doing analysis work of their mental power. To give an example, the authority of Japan took

this

kind of project to exaggerate all types of human to contribute to their economy and after that, they succeeded.

On the other hand

, some disadvantages have been observed

due to

driverless

transport

Firstly

, most of the divers will become jobless and

as a consequence

, the unemployment rate will increase dramatically.

Then

, the government need to create a new opportunity for the involvement of the previous diver.

Secondly

, for the implementation of the

driverless

cars scheme, the authority needs to invest a large portion budget to construct a new road, sign scheme, station, automated traffic signals, and control management rule.

To conclude

, though there are some disadvantages of automated vehicles, authorities need to encourage

driverless

transport

to prioritise the safety issue. Indeed, people can save their moments

as well as

they find huge time to enjoy the travelling moments in an efficient way.

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While the essay addresses the task, the response sometimes lacks focus, and the development of ideas is somewhat repetitive. Strive to provide a well-balanced argument by discussing advantages and disadvantages equally, and use specific examples to substantiate your points.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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for instance
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to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
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12Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

321 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

driverless vehicles
advantages
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increased safety
reduced traffic congestion
improved efficiency
accessibility
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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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