In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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It is often argued that in certain countries having a
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is more relevant than renting one. In my opinion,
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is a negative mindset to have and owning a
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should not be a top priority. First of all, I believe that the mindset of needing to own a
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has to be erased. The price of housing has increased every year and it is harder for future generations to buy a
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for themselves and so it is the least priority for them to think about owning a
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, the younger generation prefers to invest their money in stocks rather than to buy a
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because they think it will be more economically beneficial for their future and these days people
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prefer to save their money for fun activities like travelling.
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, having a
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is not a prime concern for the newer generation.
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, renting a
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is more efficient. We can see how buying a
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means that we
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need to pay more bills and we need to pay more attention to our money management.
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when having a
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, the water, gas, and electricity bills have to be paid separately,
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rent it usually already includes all the bills that need to be paid in one payment. That’s why renting a
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will be easier to manage.
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, I strongly believe that owning a
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is more necessary than renting a
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because it is more beneficial and efficient.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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