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The given maps represent Grange Park in 1920 and the same park today. Overall, many facilities were constructed, except entrance place everything had changed gradually.

The given maps represent Grange Park in 1920 and the same park today. Overall, many facilities were constructed, except entrance place everything had changed gradually.
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The given maps represent
Grange
Park
 in 1920 and the same
park
 today.
Overall
, many facilities were constructed, except entrance place everything had changed gradually. Looking at the details of
Grange
Park
 in 1920,
entrance
Correct article usage
the entrance
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 and rose
garden
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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 in both south and north parts of the map. Between entrances in the middle of the
Grange
Park
 fountain was built,
nearby
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a nearby
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 tribune for musicians was constructed inter Rose gardens. In the corner of the
park
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,park
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 seats were located.
However
, in the right
part
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,part
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 glasshouse was detected. Natural habitats
such
 as
pond
Fix the agreement mistake
ponds
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 for water plants,
rose
Correct word choice
and rose
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garden
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gardens
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 were in the North-East part of Arnold Avenue. Turning to the details of
Grange
park
Correct your spelling
Park
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 nowadays,
in
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on
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 the left side of the Arnold Avenue
amphitheater
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amphitheatre
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 constructed for concerts,
however
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,however
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 rose
garden
 above it stayed in the same place.
Instead
 of
fountain
Correct article usage
a fountain
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 rose
garden
 and seats were built for people’s comfort zone.
Rose
Correct article usage
The Rose
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garden
 and pond for plants were replaced with
cafe
Correct article usage
a cafe
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 and area for play. In the right corner of the
Grange
Park
 glasshouse was reconstructed into
water
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a water
the water
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 feature.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grange, park, garden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changed" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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