Many people choose to be vegan these days. What are the causes? Is this a positive or negative development?
A
lot
of individuals these days like to be vegetarian. In my opinion, I think Use synonyms
this
is because they want to protect Linking Words
animals
and be healthy; Use synonyms
however
, it is a negative development because human bodies need enough vitamins and protein.
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Firstly
, some Linking Words
people
like to be vegetarian because they want to protect Use synonyms
animals
from extinction. Use synonyms
This
is because Linking Words
people
who are not Use synonyms
vegetarians
eat a Use synonyms
lot
of Use synonyms
animals
, so Use synonyms
vegetarians
hate them because they think they are very irresponsible since they do not take care of the Use synonyms
animals
. When Use synonyms
vegetarians
see them eating Use synonyms
chicken
or Use synonyms
meat
, they feel angry and gross and sometimes they throw out.
Another reason is that some Use synonyms
people
like to be vegetarian because they want to be healthy. Use synonyms
This
is because plant-based food is healthy, so they can not be fat by eating it. They think Linking Words
meat
and chickens are not healthy because they can be fat from eating them. They think they can get sick from the Use synonyms
meat
and Use synonyms
chicken
. Use synonyms
For example
, when they eat a Linking Words
lot
of Use synonyms
meat
, it will be bad, and they will get cholesterol.
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Finally
, In my opinion, when Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
be
Wrong verb form
are
vegetarians
, it is not useful for their bodies because plant-based food does not have enough vitamins and protein, so the body can not be strong and they can get sick easily because of the low immunity, so they should eat meats, Use synonyms
chicken
and fish because they have a Use synonyms
lot
of vitamins and proteins. In some countries, these foods are used in traditional medicines. Use synonyms
For instance
, In my country, if anyone is sick, they should eat Linking Words
meat
and drink Use synonyms
chicken
soup with lemon. Use synonyms
This
in fact has been practiced for centuries because of its benefits to the body.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
people
choose to be Use synonyms
vegetarians
because they can save the Use synonyms
animals
and be healthy. It would be bad to be vegetarian because plant-based food does not have enough nutrients like meats and fish. It is Use synonyms
therefore
important for everyone to take care of the Linking Words
animals
, but they should not be Use synonyms
vegetarians
.Use synonyms
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The essay partially responds to the task by presenting reasons for people choosing to be vegetarian. However, the ideas lack clarity, and relevant specific examples are not effectively used to support the main points. More focus on addressing the prompt directly and clearly is necessary.