Many people choose to be vegan these days. What are the causes? Is this a positive or negative development?
A
lot
of individuals these days like to be vegetarian. In my opinion, I think this
is because they want to protect animals
and be healthy; however
, it is a negative development because human bodies need enough vitamins and protein.
Firstly
, some people
like to be vegetarian because they want to protect animals
from extinction. This
is because people
who are not vegetarians
eat a lot
of animals
, so vegetarians
hate them because they think they are very irresponsible since they do not take care of the animals
. When vegetarians
see them eating chicken
or meat
, they feel angry and gross and sometimes they throw out.
Another reason is that some people
like to be vegetarian because they want to be healthy. This
is because plant-based food is healthy, so they can not be fat by eating it. They think meat
and chickens are not healthy because they can be fat from eating them. They think they can get sick from the meat
and chicken
. For example
, when they eat a lot
of meat
, it will be bad, and they will get cholesterol.
Finally
, In my opinion, when people
be
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are
vegetarians
, it is not useful for their bodies because plant-based food does not have enough vitamins and protein, so the body can not be strong and they can get sick easily because of the low immunity, so they should eat meats, chicken
and fish because they have a lot
of vitamins and proteins. In some countries, these foods are used in traditional medicines. For instance
, In my country, if anyone is sick, they should eat meat
and drink chicken
soup with lemon. This
in fact has been practiced for centuries because of its benefits to the body.
To sum up
, people
choose to be vegetarians
because they can save the animals
and be healthy. It would be bad to be vegetarian because plant-based food does not have enough nutrients like meats and fish. It is therefore
important for everyone to take care of the animals
, but they should not be vegetarians
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The essay partially responds to the task by presenting reasons for people choosing to be vegetarian. However, the ideas lack clarity, and relevant specific examples are not effectively used to support the main points. More focus on addressing the prompt directly and clearly is necessary.