The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
The given bar chart illustrates a
number
of sea creatures, such
as seals, whales, and dolphins, recorded from 2006 -2018 in the Gormez Straits.
Overall
, the number
of dolphins recorded increased every four years in the Gormez Straits. However
, Seal experience rose after 2010, and Whales recorded fewer than 30.
To begin
with, in 2006, Gormez Straits recorded 43 seals. However
, in 2010 the total fell and raised in 2014 and 2018. In 2018 the number
was above 40. The number
of whales fluctuated figure in 2006. The number
was 24, and then
four years later, the number
rose to 25. But in 2014 and 2018, the number
increased to 45. Moreover
, the Dolphin's number
increased every four years. In 2006, the number
was 18 and experienced a rose and reached a peak in 2018 at 52. The number
of three animals is not seen more than 60 and most of the sight seen under 50.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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