The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart illustrates the
bananas
prices from four different countries in the world over a 10-year period.
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Overall
, Japan sold Linking Words
bananas
at the highest Use synonyms
price
of the other three countries Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
bananas
in the Use synonyms
USA
cost the lowest Use synonyms
price
.
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According to
the data, the cost of purchasing Linking Words
bananas
in Japan fluctuated from 1994 to 2004. In the beginning, the Use synonyms
price
was approximately 3 Use synonyms
dollars
. Use synonyms
Then
, it dropped to 2 Linking Words
dollars
per kilogram between 1996 to 1998 and slightly increased in 1999. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the cost of purchasing Linking Words
bananas
in Jan was sharply decreased to 1.5 Use synonyms
dollars
in 2000, which was lower than the Use synonyms
price
of Use synonyms
bananas
in the Use synonyms
USA
(over 2 Use synonyms
dollars
per kilogram) in the same period.
To purchase Use synonyms
bananas
in the Use synonyms
USA
, the Use synonyms
price
was constantly the same from 1994 to 1997 before it vary in Use synonyms
price
. it was gently increased to almost 2 Use synonyms
dollars
in 1998 and Use synonyms
then
dropped to 1 dollar in 2003. After that, it rose to over 1.5 Linking Words
dollars
per kilogram. Use synonyms
While
, the Linking Words
price
of Use synonyms
bananas
in Germany fluctuated from 1994 to 2002 from approximately 1.5 Use synonyms
dollars
to almost 1 dollar before it remained stable in the years 2002 ,2003 and 2004. For the Use synonyms
USA
banana Use synonyms
price
, it was relatively plateaued at the beginning of 1994 and stabilised for more than 6 years to the end of the year 2004.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, price, usa, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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