The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart illustrates the
bananas
prices from four different countries in the world over a 10-year period.
Overall
, Japan sold
bananas
at the highest
price
of the other three countries
while
bananas
in the
USA
cost the lowest
price
.
According to
the data, the cost of purchasing
bananas
in Japan fluctuated from 1994 to 2004. In the beginning, the
price
was approximately 3
dollars
.
Then
, it dropped to 2
dollars
per kilogram between 1996 to 1998 and slightly increased in 1999.
On the other hand
, the cost of purchasing
bananas
in Jan was sharply decreased to 1.5
dollars
in 2000, which was lower than the
price
of
bananas
in the
USA
(over 2
dollars
per kilogram) in the same period. To purchase
bananas
in the
USA
, the
price
was constantly the same from 1994 to 1997 before it vary in
price
. it was gently increased to almost 2
dollars
in 1998 and
then
dropped to 1 dollar in 2003. After that, it rose to over 1.5
dollars
per kilogram.
While
, the
price
of
bananas
in Germany fluctuated from 1994 to 2002 from approximately 1.5
dollars
to almost 1 dollar before it remained stable in the years 2002 ,2003 and 2004. For the
USA
banana
price
, it was relatively plateaued at the beginning of 1994 and stabilised for more than 6 years to the end of the year 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, price, usa, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • price fluctuation
  • steady increase/decrease
  • significant rise/drop
  • trend
  • noticeable
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • highest
  • lowest
  • throughout the period
  • stable
  • volatile
  • potential reasons
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