In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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is the norm

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in others it is provided by the government free of charge. Many people think that the latter should be adopted across the world. I would agree with

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sentiment and would argue that universal access to

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should be seen as a human right. Perhaps the biggest problem with

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healthcare

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is the cost. Because an efficient

healthcare

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service costs a great deal of money to provide, governments need to raise extra funds in order to cover costs. The only way of doing

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is to collect taxes from the population. Many people object to

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and see it

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paying for a service that they may not use. They argue that private

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is a much more effective service.

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, proponents of a

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system argue that everybody should have access to medical

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the quality of the care and

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provided should be universal. They claim that private

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which is run for profit leads to inequality.

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is because if individuals are forced to pay for their own

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excludes the poor from access to help and only the wealthy are able to benefit.

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is an issue that has polarized opinion in a number of countries.

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America recently implemented a

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system and it was met with widespread protests from half of the population.

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, I would agree that the government should provide

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to its citizens as is the model in many European countries. In

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there are high costs involved, universal health care should be a priority for governments. It is evident that not everybody is in agreement with

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but I think that it is unethical for people to suffer because they cannot afford

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for a medical condition.