Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays

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freedom has increased exponentially.

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of that they tend to publicize everything even the

crimes

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. There is an idea that some

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think that incidence like

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should not be reported. I totally agree with

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statement because on the one ,hand it can lead to more criminal activities and

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these scenes can be sensitive to some

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with, reporting

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openly in public

media

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like television, radio and newspapers can lead to escalating these situations more and more. When social platforms talk about these criminals who perform these activities

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famous in the wrong way,

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others can make it an influence.

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some may try to recreate criminal activities because of the fame they get through the

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, in the US there was a murder case in which television and radio publicized the details.

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a few months after the initial ,incident identical

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had taken place,

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responsible persons were caught by the police later. They found that the motivation behind the scene was to gain popularity among a particular gang.

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, there are numerous

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who can be very sensitive to these violent visuals and even audio.

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media

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use blinds or blurry screens to avoid highly sensitive footage and pictures, some may not be completely immune to the situation.

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, children may get lifetime traumas because of

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. Even though they may seem fine at the initial moment they get exposed to violent scenes, the trauma

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caused by it could affect them later in their life. In conclusion, several

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think that crime publication through

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should stop. I completely agree with

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view because reporting them may eventually lead to more crime and some

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could suffer mental trauma from visualising them.

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