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Educaiton should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of educaiton, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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Education has seen great progress from the past to the present.
Nevertheless
, statistics show that people's interest in improvement is increasing rapidly every year. It is true that improvement means a lot to folk in our contemporary world. Today, the growing demand for learning
due to
 globalization emphasizes its importance.
This
 issue of literacy is important for some nations, not important for others, it is left to their own personal opinions. The problem of our modern civilization is still those who think negatively about information On the one hand ,teaching it's good for children and humanity.
Moreover
, as some argue, the thoughts of people living in remote parts of the world prove that culture is not important. One of the main reasons for
this
 is,
for example
, a different way of thinking and a different outlook. If the labour capacity of humanity increases, the development potential will
also
 increase
On the other hand
, I agree that we have several options in terms of alternatives because I believe that training is not only interesting for me but for everyone. A short experience shows that if we study teaching, we should shed light on the path of adults and children with what we learn. In conclusion, it is confirmed once again that information is a useful alternative for the development of the nation.
In addition
, it is recommended to classify different types of science and it is important for association.
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