The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
Given are two
pie
charts revealing compare five methods of reaching news
in Canada and Australia.
Overall
, the Online method is top of the list on both sides .
To begin
, Canada's print rate
accounting
for double Replace the word
accounts
to
Australia's print percentage respectively,14 Change preposition
apply
percent
and 7 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. In Change the spelling
per cent
Canada
Change noun form
Canada's
pie
chart , TV areas take the lead at 40 percent
. followed by online Change the spelling
per cent
news
with 36 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
News
Correct article usage
The news
rate
from radio at 7 percent
and the lowest Change the spelling
per cent
rate
was seen in not specified news
with 3 percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, in Australia
the Add a comma
,Australia
rate
of online has surranded more than half of the pie
chart . TV rates approximately reach 40 percent
but Change the spelling
per cent
this
rate
stayed at 37 percent
. The lowest Change the spelling
per cent
rate
Add a verb
israte
wasrate
seperate
for two vias , not specified and radio .
It is Correct your spelling
separate
also
interesting to note that , ın
both Correct your spelling
in
pie
charts the lowest rate
is not specified .Submitted by steam_ahmet2004 on
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