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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two
pie
 charts revealing compare five methods of reaching
news
 in Canada and Australia.
Overall
, the Online method is top of the list on both sides .
To begin
 , Canada's print
rate
accounting
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 for double
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Australia's print percentage respectively,14
percent
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 and 7
percent
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per cent
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. In
Canada
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Canada's
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pie
 chart , TV areas take the lead at 40
percent
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per cent
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. followed by online
news
 with 36
percent
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per cent
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.
News
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rate
 from radio at 7
percent
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per cent
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 and the lowest
rate
 was seen in not specified
news
 with 3
percent
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per cent
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.
On the other hand
 , in
Australia
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 the
rate
 of online has surranded more than half of the
pie
 chart . TV rates approximately reach 40
percent
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per cent
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 but
this
rate
 stayed at 37
percent
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per cent
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. The lowest
rate
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seperate
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separate
 for two vias , not specified and radio . It is
also
 interesting to note that ,
ın
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in
 both
pie
 charts the lowest
rate
 is not specified .
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, news, rate, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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