Some people say that young people should follow the traditions of their society and some say they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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Traditional aspects are always considered one of the most valuable properties of a community.
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some people believe that the young generation should live in those aspects, others contrast encourage the youth to choose their own way of life. In
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essay, I will approach both opinions and state the reason why I would like
youngsters
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to live with their own choice developed from the
traditions
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. On the one hand, in a quickly evolving world, following
traditions
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could leave young people far back behind the world's development which may cause many issues for them. Students study abroad,
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, who are always mindful about presenting something to their relatives as a way of expressing their respect to them. It can lead to some negative things
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as financial problems, and pressure...,
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they tend to avoid travelling back home to visit their family even if they are extremely homesick.
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, the
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might hold back the
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' career path by following things that do not fit their personality or their strength but are suitable with the norms of their community.
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, cultural values and ethics are more important to understand our history and heritage. First of all, cultural values are vanishing from
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. They do not like to follow old
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.
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, our next generation will suffer from a lot of consequences.
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, they are unable to learn about those cultures
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lose the importance of historical things.
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, the government should teach them about cultural values and provide some attractive offers like discounts on movie tickets or free food offered in
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seminar. So, more and more people attend seminars and are aware of our culture.
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, it depends on
youngsters
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to follow our heritage or not.
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, in my view, everyone should go their own ways built up from our ancient rituals which will ensure that our future generation will clearly understand our rich culture, develop it and intersect it with other ones.
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