One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvatages?

In present days, medical care has improved and it caused those people are living longer.

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, life expectancy is

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increasing. In my view, I slightly agree with

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statement where advantages can outweigh the disadvantages.

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writing will be given the reasons. On the one hand, there are many benefits from high life expectancy.

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if the

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of adults inclines

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the

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of children will follow it.

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good for our future because we have the next generation which can gain more knowledge from the current improvement.

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, the doctor found new methods for curing pain, and in the next few

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a new generation will find more methods.

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our habitat is not going to be a crisis for humans.

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,

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gives unbeneficial things,

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as, the life cost becomes more expensive.

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, the population in Jakarta has increased,

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, some families should move to another city for looking a house. The

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of homeless people

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can increase if poor families can not handle the birth rate.

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, the road traffic and the

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of public transportation will be going up. In conclusion, there are no right or wrong sides to

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statement. In case, it

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depends on the person itself. In Japan, people lived until 100 years old but the young generation wont to have kids.

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, it will bad for Japan because they can not maintain their population but the living expense are keep growing.