One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvatages?

In present days, medical care has improved and it caused those people are living longer.

Thus

, life expectancy is

also

increasing. In my view, I slightly agree with

this

statement where advantages can outweigh the disadvantages.

This

writing will be given the reasons. On the one hand, there are many benefits from high life expectancy.

First,

if the

number

of adults inclines

then

the

number

of children will follow it.

That is

good for our future because we have the next generation which can gain more knowledge from the current improvement.

For instance

, the doctor found new methods for curing pain, and in the next few

years

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a new generation will find more methods.

Second,

our habitat is not going to be a crisis for humans.

On the other hand

,

this

case

also

gives unbeneficial things,

such

as, the life cost becomes more expensive.

For example

, the population in Jakarta has increased,

furthermore

, some families should move to another city for looking a house. The

number

of homeless people

also

can increase if poor families can not handle the birth rate.

In addition

, the road traffic and the

number

of public transportation will be going up. In conclusion, there are no right or wrong sides to

this

statement. In case, it

also

depends on the person itself. In Japan, people lived until 100 years old but the young generation wont to have kids.

Hence

, it will bad for Japan because they can not maintain their population but the living expense are keep growing.