A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Thanks her for the present and say why you particularly like it. -Describe some other presents that you received. -Explain some of the things you did on your birthday.

#friend #birthday #-thanks #-describe #-explain

Dear Jane, How is your trip? I’m just writing to tell you that I’ve received your gift. Thank you so much for the watch! You surprised me. How did you know I was looking for a Rolex? I love the minimalistic design of the watch and its leather strap. I’m sure it will be my fashion accessory because it looks so stunning. You know, I was so happy on my birthday

this

year. My husband made me feel moved with a bouquet and a heart-shaped ring. I hadn’t seen him in

such

a romantic manner before.

Also

, my son drew me a picture by himself with the line “Mom, I love you”. The weather was not so good that day, so I had a small celebration with my family at home. My sisters cooked me some of my favourite courses, and we sang karaoke during the meal. It was

such

a warm and lovely party. I’ll tell you more when you are back. Enjoy your holiday! Best regards, Maria

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

169 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Thanks her for the present and say why you particularly like it. -Describe some other presents that you received. -Explain some of the things you did on your birthday.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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