Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals believe that hazardous
sport
should Fix the agreement mistake
sports
prohibited
, and others believe Change the verb form
be prohibited
otherwise
.In my opinion, people
should have freedom
to play any Add an article
the freedom
sport
they want regardless of possible risk.
On the one hand, some members of society hold idea
that the uncertain Add an article
the idea
sport
should banned
. they think Change the verb form
be banned
people
who engage in risky sport
are more likely to get serious injuries and even death. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
For example
, every single day many people
pass away or get horrible injuries result of fall
from Wrong verb form
falling
Everest
mountains. Correct article usage
the Everest
As a result
, this
Correct determiner usage
these
sports
can have negative impacts in
Change preposition
on
people
life and reduce Change noun form
people's
the
life expectancy.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, I agree with thoses
who think Correct your spelling
those
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
should have freedom
to do any form of Add an article
the freedom
sport
for many reasons. Firstly
, there is no doubt thanks
to advancements in technology. Correct word choice
that thanks
This
is because there are many safety equipment
Change to a plural noun
equipments
such
as,
helmets, face protection,Remove the comma
apply
life
jacket, which Correct word choice
and life
this
tools can provide high
level of protection and minimize the risk of injuries. Add an article
a high
Secondly
, the
extreme Correct article usage
apply
sports
can contribute improve the economy of host
Add an article
the host
country
. To illustrate, this
risky sport
can bring fame and attract many tourists to the country
. For instance
, numerous tourists visit New Zealand in order to watch competitions in skydiving as well as
climbing mountians
. Correct your spelling
mountains
Therefore
, this
can contribute to boost
the economy of Change the verb form
boosting
country
, Add an article
the country
a country
this
is because the tourists will spend a considerable amount of money in
hotels, flights, Change preposition
on
public
transport.
In conclusion, I totally agree that risky Correct word choice
and public
sports
should not be prohibited, because there are many Change preposition
of protection
protection
equipment , and Replace the word
protective
also
this
Correct determiner usage
these
sports
can enhance the economy of country
.Add an article
the country
a country
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