eople are living in a “throwaway society”, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?
Nowadays, people are valuing belongings less, using them for a short period of time and
then
trashing them. Linking Words
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is a result of their upbringing and products not being made to Linking Words
last
a very long time. Throwing items away like Linking Words
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on our planet leading to numerous problems.
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To begin
with, in recent generations, people have been raised differently from the past. They are given what they want easily making them value belongings less. Linking Words
For example
, a child who is given a new pencil every day will not care if they lose the pencil. Contradictorily, if they are given a pencil to use once a year, they will take extremely good care of it.
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, companies are starting to make their products less durable and sustainable to increase sales and profits. To put it in perspective, if a product lasts a lifetime, customers will not have to purchase a new one. Linking Words
For instance
, phones are now being made with less durability than before. Old models like the Samsung Hero, could survive being thrown down multiple flights of stairs, but newer phones can break with just a fall from a table.
The more things being thrown away the more Linking Words
trash
there is on our earth. Having an enormous amount of garbage is a waste of space and can harm the environment. To remove Use synonyms
trash
, we have to burn them. The burning of Use synonyms
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emits greenhouse gases, Use synonyms
such
as carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, which leads to global warming. The increase of heat is a potential health hazard and has been an issue for us humans for centuries, Linking Words
this
is only making the situation worse.
In conclusion, the upbringing of people is causing them to value things less, resulting in more Linking Words
trash
on our planet. The process of removing Use synonyms
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requires burning, Use synonyms
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polluting the world with harmful gases that contribute to global warming.Linking Words
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Consider providing more varied examples from different fields, such as technology, fashion, or household items, to enhance the richness of the examples highlighting the throwaway culture.
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- Conclusion
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