The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia
The two pie charts compare five categories ( Tv, radio, print, online, not specified) means of approaching the
news
in Canada and
Australia
. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the proportion of accessing the
news
online experienced a significant rose in
Australia
while
print noticeably fall.
According to
information,
way
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in
news
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the news
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online made up 36%
in
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Canada,
however
,
this
figure saw a big rose in
Australia
, at 52%.
Print
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an average way
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accesing
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accessing
the
news
in Canada, accounted for 14%. By
vontrast
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contrast
,
this
category made up just over one in twenty in
Australia
.
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