the chart below shows what antropolology graduates from one university did aftr finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

the chart below shows what antropolology graduates from one university did aftr finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The pie chart demonstrates
destination
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of Anthropology
graduates
from one university. It ranges from full-time
work
to not known
graduates
. The table illustrates
wages
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the wages
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of Anthropology
graduates
after five year’s
work
.
Overall
, the pie chart shows
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most
graduates
have full-time
work
and
also
the highest level of salaries is for government sectors based on the table information. It is observed that
,
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fifty-two
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of students found
full-time
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a full-time
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job
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jobs
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while
fifteen
percent
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have
part-time
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the part-time
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job
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jobs
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.
However
, twelve
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are unemployed after finishing their course. There
some
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students who were not known with eight
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of
graduates
. In continuing, it seems that just five
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of them have
part-time
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a part-time
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jobs
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and
educating
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for
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a master
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and eight
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continue their education full-time.
According to
the table, all Anthropology
graduates
work
in private companies,
government
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the government
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sector and
freelance
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as freelance
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consultants. Salaries of employees started from 25.000
dollars
to 100.000
dollars
.
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workers
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private companies get 50.000
dollars
but
the
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most employees
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government
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the government
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sector have superb
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about
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100.000
dollars
.
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, forty
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of freelancers earn 75.000
dollars
and
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the other
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forty
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earn 100.000
dollars
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, work, percent, dollars with synonyms.
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