Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are not able to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Explain why you cannot go - say that you will give your friend a gift the next time you see him/her -suggest another time and place to meet

#friend #birthday #party #-explain #gift #time #-suggest #place

Dear Srishti, Hope you're well! I'm very sorry, but I'll not be able to attend your birthday party next week

due to

work commitments. I know I had said earlier that I'd join but unfortunately, some

last

-minute schedule changes at work made me cancel my bus tickets to your place. I got you a really nice sweater from 'Bershka' and I can't wait to see you wearing it. It's in your favourite colour, Blue. I cannot believe that I'm missing your 20th birthday. Perhaps we could video call that day when you're cutting the cake. Hopefully, all your other friends would join

Correct pronoun usage

us to

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celebrate with you.

Moreover

, I'll definitely be visiting you next month on the 15th as I took a week off from work already. We can catch up

then

and party like we used to. Please accept my sincere apologies. I wish I could join but next time for sure!

Also

, do send me your birthday pictures by post as soon as you get them. Best wishes, Akshita

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

170 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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