You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all the communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In this letter: - Where have you moved to? - What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? What you want them to do regarding the old communication already sent to the wrong address?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request a change in address to which all bank information is sent. Two
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ago I moved from Moscow to the suburbs, so I would like to update my client’s profile. My current address is: Odintsovo, Lesnaya
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, 1, 14. Unfortunately, all the communication has been sent to my previous accommodation since October,
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is why I have not received any messages.
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, I was not properly informed about money transfers from my account.
Also
, I missed a notification that a free period of using
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credit card had expired, which led to extra
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on my part. I kindly request that you update my address information at
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earliest convenience and
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resend to my new location all mailings that had been already sent to the wrong place.
Additionally
, I look forward to receiving confirmation of the
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changes. Thank you for your prompt attention to
this
matter. If you require any additional details, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Helen Ten
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Task Achievement
Ensure that you specify the nature of the communications you've missed, as this adds relevance to the urgency of updating your address.
Coherence and Cohesion
While your letter is well-structured, consider using a variety of linking words to enhance the flow of ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Relocation
  • Outdated information
  • Critical notifications
  • Sensitive documents
  • Data protection
  • Address verification
  • Notification retrieval
  • Account details
  • Immediate attention
  • Customer service
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