You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all the communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In this letter: - Where have you moved to? - What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? What you want them to do regarding the old communication already sent to the wrong address?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request a change in address to which all bank information is sent.
Two
month
ago I moved from Moscow to the suburbs, so I would like to update my client’s profile. My current address is: Odintsovo, Lesnaya Change to a plural noun
months
street
, 1, 14.
Unfortunately, all the communication has been sent to my previous accommodation since October, Capitalize word
Street
that
is why I have not received any messages. Correct pronoun usage
which
Therefore
, I was not properly informed about money transfers from my account. Also
, I missed a notification that a free period of using premium
credit card had expired, which led to extra Correct article usage
a premium
expanses
on my part.
I kindly request that you update my address information at Correct your spelling
expenses
the
earliest convenience and Change the word
your
also
resend to my new location all mailings that had been already sent to the wrong place. Additionally
, I look forward to receiving confirmation of the requiring
changes.
Thank you for your prompt attention to Replace the word
required
this
matter. If you require any additional details, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
Helen TenSubmitted by fednastya000 on
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Task Achievement
Ensure that you specify the nature of the communications you've missed, as this adds relevance to the urgency of updating your address.
Coherence and Cohesion
While your letter is well-structured, consider using a variety of linking words to enhance the flow of ideas between sentences and paragraphs.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite