The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the overweight population is much bigger than three decades ago
due to
the improvement of
life, which caused Change preposition
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the
growing pressure on the healthcare system. To solve Correct article usage
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this
problem, some people think that introducing more physical education
in school
should be given a try. Personally speaking, I'm definitely in favour of their opinions.
First of all, teenagers in school
are firm fundamentals of this
society as well as
the bright future of human beings. As far as I observed, teachers are usually pushing a lot on students
' studies, tending to ignore their physical exercise. As a result
, students
are not aware of the importance of building the body. Alternatively, drinks and snacks are so common and available in school
, I reckon that most students
adores
them just like me. Change the verb form
adore
Therefore
, they couldn't consume these calories unless there are correct education
and guidance. In a word, relevant courses could be a key to raise
people's attention to managing their weight from an early stage.
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Secondly
, the younger generation has a huge impact on their families and peers so their physical habits will be spread quickly and be adopted by more people. Hence
, education
in school
could educate those who are not in school
, too. For example
, one of my friends was born in
a family where everyone was fat. Change preposition
into
However
, he was in love with working out and persuaded his parents to do it together. One year later, their family obesity was gone. From my perspective, it is hard to find a perfect way to deal with the social problem though, finding a breakpoint such
as physical education
in school
turns out to be a reasonable approach.
In conclusion, I definitely support the idea to cultivate more physical content in school
. It's not only for those in school
,
but Remove the comma
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also
for those related to them, basically everyone. Under this
strategy, the 20s will have a good sense of controlling weight, 40s
will be told to do the same and when Correct article usage
the 40s
students
grow up into adults, they will pass the concept to the next generation. Anyway, the positive effect is a long-term thing in my opinion.Submitted by wynton2020 on
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