The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
The provided pie charts illustrate the proportion of annual sources of income and
expense
of the United States of America charity during 2016.
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expenses
To begin
with, it is evident from the charts that both Linking Words
of
the total revenues and Change preposition
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the expenses amount
are approximately 53 million dollars. The total revenue is slightly greater than the total expense which indicated that it is sufficient to cover all the expenses. The primary revenue source is from Change to a genitive case
the amount of the expense
the amount of the expenses
the
food donation, at 86.6%. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, almost 96% of expense is Linking Words
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for the program services.
The other categories are much smaller. Community contributions provided around 10% of total incomes followed by the program revenue at 2.2 %. Wrong verb form
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Moreover
, investment income, government grants and other income are accounting for only 0.8% combined. Linking Words
In addition
, the USA charity only spends the expenses for other two purposes which are Linking Words
fund raising
, and management and general for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively.Correct your spelling
fundraising
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