The graph below shows how people buy music.
The given line graph illustrates information about how users purchase music by using 3 different methods namely
streams
, downloads
, and CDs
purchased between 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the percentage of CDs
purchased showed a downward trend while
the percentage of streams
showed an upward trend over the period. At the same time, the figure of
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for
downloads
had
remained stable.
In 2011, approximately 55% of people used Unnecessary verb
apply
CDs
purchased to buy music while
the number of streams
showed the lowest figure at only 5%. Between 2016 and 2017, the streams
services took over Change the noun form
stream
CDs
purchased at just under 30% before rising to over 40% and fell down 25% respectively at the end
of the period.
Between 2014 to 2015, the percentage of downloads
reached its peak of over 40% after steadily increasing from 35% in 2011. From 2017 to 2018, streams
services took over Change the noun form
stream
downloads
at around 33% and it started to decrease slowly from 42% to 30% in 2018 eventually.Submitted by kim88974150 on
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