Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem. To what extent do you agree?

Climate
change
is a very real danger that threatens not only our lives but
also
the quality of life of future generations. To combat
this
I strongly disagree that
individuals
need to take
responsibility
because
governments
, in cooperation with private companies have both a greater
responsibility
and capacity in
this
matter.
Climate
change
cannot simply be the
responsibility
of private citizens because they do not have the ability to affect large systemic changes in the way that
governments
in conjunction with corporations do. People can only contribute in small ways; for every person who recycles there are several people who do not and there is no certain way to
change
this
.
Governments
,
on the other hand
, can enact legislation requiring both
individuals
and large corporations to abide by certain restrictions. Laws for corporations are the real solution as they contribute by far the most to
climate
change
and by reducing how much waste
produced
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and how they treat that waste,
climate
change
can be seriously countered. The
second
reason
governments
should be responsible for combating
climate
change
is that
governments
are responsible for global problems while
individuals
should only have to deal with local and personal problems. A person should only concern themselves with their job and personal life because
that is
the extent of their
responsibility
.
Governments
are responsible for various things related to their citizens including security, health care in some cases, and education. Included
in security
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is the environment because it impacts
citizen’s
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well-being;
therefore
this
falls under the remit of governmental
responsibility
.
Individuals
will never be able to have the effect government will and it is not their
responsibility
at any rate. In my opinion,
governments
, by taking measures to rein in corporate and private waste are taking up their rightful burden.
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  • phenomenon
  • responsibility
  • address
  • crucial role
  • impact
  • collaboration
  • carbon footprint
  • regulations
  • policies
  • incentivize
  • act responsibly
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