The key to solving environmental problems is simple: present generations must have a less comfortable life for the sake of future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The environment has sparked a heated debate.
While
I accept that present
generations
must
use
fewer
resources
which is the most simple way to reduce pollution in the
future
, I
also
believe that
people
should
use
fairly
resources
. On the one hand, there are a couple of vital reasons why I agree that present
generations
have to have a less comfortable life for the sake of the next
generations
.
Firstly
, natural
resources
do not
last
forever.
Thus
if the present generation uses a lot of
resources
, they will run out in the
future
.
This
is lead to
future
generations
will not have enough of them to
use
.
Secondly
,
people
can reduce the amount of emissions and waste in the environment.
As a result
,
future
generations
avoid natural disasters
such
as global warming, and melting ice at the poles.
On the other hand
, I am convinced that
people
who live in
this
day only need to
use
suitable
resources
. First and foremost, using suitable natural
resources
helps present
people
have a quality life.
This
allows the present
generations
to have enough
energy
to
use
and the next
generations
not to lack
resources
.
In addition
, we should invent sustainable
energy
to replace non-renewable
energy
such
as eco
energy
. In conclusion,
although
the simple way to make better the lives of
future
generations
is for
people
must have a less comfortable life, it seems to me that present
people
only need to
use
suitable
energy
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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