The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. 

Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
The pie charts
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the composition of people in each zone of the world from 1900 and 2000.
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, a glance at the figure provided reveals that the number of worldwide individuals increased during the period, and
the
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Asian citizens had the highest number among all regions. Based on
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in 1900, Asia dominated globally
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the
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population
at
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60%, followed by Europe continent with
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at
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inhabitants.
In contrast
, the remaining regions (North America, Africa, Latin America, and Others) had small percentages between 3% and 5% of 1,6 billion habitants. In the next century, the number of people rose by around five times to 6 billion. Asia Pacific, which had included former countries from
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, still became the majority population of the world,
although
it showed a decrease to 54 per cent.
Moreover
, the second domination of people was Europe, which drop significantly to 14%,
whereas
, the other countries had only below 9%.
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