Thanks to globalization societies are becoming more and more alike. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Globalization
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communities are increasing which are broadening equality for
people
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around the world, but some
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think that an era might lead to the total loss of cultural identity. In my point of view, I agree that local culture might inevitably disappear in the future because it is not interesting anymore and not suitable in some circumstances. Each
globalization
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society urged
people
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to speak one
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so they might communicate effectively,
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, United Nations use English or French.
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,
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will think that English is the most important and attractive
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to be learned.
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, the local
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is less attractive and less useful,
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, In Indonesia, there was the Betawi
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20 years ago but now, it was disappeared.
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, the
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that has been passed from generation to generation might disappear.
Although
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globalization
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opens new opportunities for jobs and studies abroad,
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are afraid that new cultures will not be suitable to their ancestor’s beliefs.
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, my grandparents came from China and he came to Indonesia to build his own business. He has a Chinese ritual to eat a rice cake
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the whole family in the winter. But now, there is no winter season in Indonesia, so that
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is not held here.
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, if there is a family moves abroad because of an economic motif, their previous cultural
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might be forgotten.
To conclude
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, despite the benefits of
globalization
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for societies, it might lead to the total loss of cultural identity because the previous
tradition
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is not relevant and
language
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is not a part of their identity anymore.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • societies
  • alike
  • cultural identity
  • fear
  • inevitably
  • promotes
  • exchange
  • understanding
  • homogenization
  • preservation
  • revitalization
  • impact
  • varies
  • context
  • individuals
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