Some people think that cultural tranditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that it is the only way to save these tranditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent times, the rationale between

tranditions

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traditions

and commerce become

one

of the controversial debates.

Traditions

are believed by some individuals to be destroyed

due to

raising profit. Others believe

this

is the comprehensive way to rescue them.

This

essay will analyze two factors which will contribute to my opinion. First of all, commercial

tranditions

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traditions

are considerably adjusted in order to generate various

beneficial

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for tourism. Specifically, the tourism industry is widely expected to create

prosperous

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marketplace which attracts

investors

. To perform

this

strategic

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,

changing

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in conventions are widely acknowledged by

numberous

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numerous

companies to attract

tourist

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tourists

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.

Nevertheless

,

this

method is

accordingly

believed to decrease primitive consequences.

For instance

,

tranditions

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traditions

transitions

such

as folk songs,

dances

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are usually

perfomed

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performed

by

professional

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professionals

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.

However

,

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nowadays, these performance

quality

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qualities

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are

decrease

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due to

appearance

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of various amateurs.

In addition

, tourist awareness is believed to cause susceptible effects. To be more specific, vandalizing

tranditions

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traditions

transitions

such

as ancient structures,

sceneries

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result in demolishing national culture.

For instance

, a well-known Youtuber named Logan Paul recently visited Japan and filmed himself dumping a bag of coins into a sacred well, where people often drop coins for luck

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and did permanent damage to

one

of Japan’s most famous iconic

traditions

.

On the other hand

, multiple

traditions

are widely expected to be popularized by tourism

investors

.

Tranditions

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Traditions

Transitions

are significantly known to

represents

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the appearance of the country, investing national convention is an appropriate method to enhancing

one

’s image value, which attracts foreign

investors

.

For instance

,

one

of the well-known

traditions

in Vietnam is fish sauce.

Due to

capital from foreign

investors

, fish sauce exportation has grown critically.

In addition

, the revenue could be used for the preservation of

such

traditions

.

For example

, many people in Bat Trang village in Vietnam make their living from selling traditional ceramic products

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and

thus

are able to continue

one

of the oldest

traditions

in Vietnam. In conclusion,

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effforts

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efforts

to save corroding cultures via commercial applications sparks debate

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its true efficacy.

While

supporting it may sustain the way of life against modernization, over-reliance on it could be detrimental to the subject of focus.