Global warming is one of the various climate issues. Discuss the possible causes and offer measures to control the damage caused.

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, global warming is one of the serious and growing problems we are facing. In

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essay, I will discuss the causes of global warming and suggest what action people can take to tackle

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important matter. There are several reasons

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global warming. The main reasons are the emission of CO2 and deforestation.

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number

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population in the world, humans are polluting the air and

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down trees to make

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lives greater and

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.

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, in

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, individuals

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more vehicles than in the past for their daily lives. Unfortunately,

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contributes to producing

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of CO2.

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,

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huge amount of

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has been cut down to expand the

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for their needs,

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as new train stations,

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apartments.

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the experts,

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human actions

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ozone layer and

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became

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a significant factor

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global warming.

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, there are potential ways to solve

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, or at least reduce the effect.

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driving an electric car is

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ideal to decrease producing CO2

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of driving a normal car, it is still in high price and not affordable for all citizens.

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, the government should invest more financially in

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field. If the government could establish the incentive for

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electric vehicles, there would be greater positive impacts, which not only

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the possibility

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electric car

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a greater

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to protect the ozone layer.

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from that,

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individuals can take small steps at home.

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, they

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use public transport to go to work or school at least once or twice a week. Saving energy rates is

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helpful,

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, unplug the electric devices when not using them or use

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cold water for the washing machine cycle. You can

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plant a tree or flowers in the garden.

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simple actions really add up when everyone joins in. In conclusion, I discussed the causes of global warming and

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suggested

possible measures to deal with

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important problem. In my opinion, all humans are

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to

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paramount matter as taking care of the earth is

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their

responsibility.