The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.
The following line graph demonstrates the cost of
bananas
in US dollars
per kilogram in different countries from the year 1994 to 2004. Each line represents a country which included Japan
, France, Germany, and the USA
. It is noticeable from this
illustration that Japan
has the most expensive bananas
while
the USA
has the least.
Beginning with the years 1994 to 1997, bananas
prices
peaked at as high as 3 dollars
in Japan
. While
it reached the lowest price of 0.9 in the USA
. At the same time, other locations in the world have the price at almost 1.7, 1.4, 0.9 dollars
respectively in France, Germany and USA
.
As for the years from 1998 to 2004, All regions experienced a fluctuation in prices
at first but then
in 2000
France’s Add a comma
,2000
prices
fell by 0.4 difference. Following
this
in the year 2001, Japan
also
noticeably decreased from 2.1 to 1.6 dollars
. Both increased in price later on. However
, USA
and Germany have constant prices
.
In conclusion, the most expensive bananas
are in Japan
whereas
the cheapest are in the USA
in the years from 1994 to 2004.Submitted by rawanabdulali on
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