The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.
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The following line graph demonstrates the cost of
bananas
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in US
dollars
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per kilogram in different countries from the year 1994 to 2004. Each line represents a country which included
Japan
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, France, Germany, and the
USA
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. It is noticeable from
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illustration that
Japan
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has the most expensive
bananas
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while
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the
USA
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has the least. Beginning with the years 1994 to 1997,
bananas
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prices
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peaked at as high as 3
dollars
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in
Japan
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.
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it reached the lowest price of 0.9 in the
USA
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. At the same time, other locations in the world have the price at almost 1.7, 1.4, 0.9
dollars
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respectively in France, Germany and
USA
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. As for the years from 1998 to 2004, All regions experienced a fluctuation in
prices
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at first but
then
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in
2000
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France’s
prices
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fell by 0.4 difference.
Following
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this
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in the year 2001,
Japan
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also
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noticeably decreased from 2.1 to 1.6
dollars
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. Both increased in price later on.
However
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,
USA
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and Germany have constant
prices
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. In conclusion, the most expensive
bananas
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are in
Japan
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whereas
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the cheapest are in the
USA
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in the years from 1994 to 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, dollars, japan, usa, prices with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • price fluctuation
  • steady increase/decrease
  • significant rise/drop
  • trend
  • noticeable
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • highest
  • lowest
  • throughout the period
  • stable
  • volatile
  • potential reasons
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